The diagram below give information about reforestation programmes.

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The diagram below give information about reforestation programmes.

The bar charts indicate the amounts of reforestation in different countries and on a world scale as per statistics and prophecies in various years, while the pie chart demonstrates the current nations' tendencies for reforestation.

Taking a look at the bar charts, with the passage of time, countries' responses to the reduction of trees are likely to change for the better. In 2006, in Ireland, the percent of reforestation was about 1.4% which was the most gigantic percentage compared to that of other nations such as Thailand (1%), Hungry (0.5%), and Tasmania (1.2%). It is anticipated that these percentages will increase in 2015 and 2025, by taking account of Thailand which its forestation will not change in 2015. Interestingly enough, in the future, like the past, Ireland and Hungry will be the most and least active countries in planting respectively. Apart from that, on the global scale, it is prognosticated that in 2025, the amount of reforestation, in the world, will grow by 0.3% in contrast to 2015 (1%).

Turning to the pie chart, at this stage, some nations which are extremely worried about reforestation comprise a quarter of the world, and about 39% of countries are concerned moderately, whereas the rest do not have any anxiety about planting.

Overall, according to the predictions, by 2025, the amount of reforestation will put up moderately in the globe.

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flaws:
1. it is 'reforestation', not 'deforestation'. You misunderstood the topic.

2. Check the word 'prophecy'. You may use it wrongly. Better to use prediction or projection.

3. it should be:
while the pie chart demonstrates the current nations' concerns/interests for reforestation.

not:
while the pie chart demonstrates the current nations' tendencies for reforestation.
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