the diagrams below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of silk cloth.
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The given diagram analyzes how silkworm is made and how silk clothes are prepared.
Generally, life cycle of the silkworm is 5-sectioned and takes 2-3 months and production of silk cloth has 5 specific parts.
In the first stage, a moth puts its eggs onto a leaf and within 10 days silkworm and larvas emerge from eggs. As they feed themselves with mulberry leaf, after 4-6 weeks, they make a couple of silk threads. Larvas usually leave their cocoons within 3-8 days.
The good selected cocoons are brought up and put into water to be boiled over high temperatures in a big vessel. After unwinding, it becomes 3-9 hundred meters thread. This thread can be twisted and weaved. In this scene, finally, after waiting for some time , they are ready to be coloured.
Overall, cocoon is made within 6-8 weeks periodically, then, it is selected and due to it, silk clothes are prepared within 6 sections.
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and production of silk cloth has 5 specific parts.
and the production of silk cloth has 5 specific parts.
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