The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.
According to the graph, there is a rapid increase in March when rainfall precipitation reaches 90 mm which shows the highest temperature (23.7 degrees). Rainfall precipitation drops slightly in April which is the second highest temperature rate together with October (23.5 degrees). From May, both temperature and precipitation figures show similar way of steady decline and it reaches the bottom in July (100 mm and 5 degrees respectively).
Starting from July there is a continuous increase for rainfall precipitation until November (150 mm) when it declines gradually to 50 mm in December, whereas temperature rates shows a sign of having a steady rise until October (23.5 degrees) when it levels off strikingly during November and December (22,5 and 21,5 degrees respectively).
To sum up, both rainfall precipitation and temperature have almost similar trends throughout the year, with rare exceptions such as January, February and September when there is low rain but much higher temperature.
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when there is low rain but much higher temperature
when there is a low rain but much higher temperature
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