The graph below presents the global bird flu casualties per year.Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below presents the global bird flu casualties per year.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the number of casualties from bird flu around the world between 1990 and 2000.

In 1990, the number of bird flu sufferers stood at about 123,000. By the following two years, this figure had risen to just above 130,000 causalities before falling to 125,000 in 1991. From 1992, the amount of causalities increased gradually to approximately 135,000 and then further rose almost by 10,000 to reach 145,000 in 1995.

Similarly, in 1996, the number of bird flu victims globally reached its highest, at about 150,000. The causalities further increased considerably to more than 17...

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