The graph demonstrates the amount of fish, chicken, beef and lamb consumed in some countries of Europe from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, the consumption of beef, lamb and fish fall, except that of chicken grows, while among fish is the least popular food over the span of 25 years.
The consumption of fish was about 52 grams in 1979, dropped to around 45 grams by 2004. Although people consumed less than 100 grams of fish every week, it remained the most steady compared with others.
At approximately 140 grams per person per week, chicken accounted for the second least food chosen by people; however, it trend overtook that of lamb and beef in 1980 and 1988 respectively, then, reached it peaked about 260 grams by 2001.By contrast, both trends of beef and lamb declined despite of some fluctuation. The figure of beef was at 220 grams in 1979, went down to only about 100 grams in 2004. In comparison, the consumption of lamb was around 150 grams and decreased to just 60 grams in the 25 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
...east food chosen by people; however, it trend overtook that of lamb and beef in 1980 ...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...ached it peaked about 260 grams by 2001.By contrast, both trends of beef and lamb ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.268076937826 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.09 0.116061578633 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.045 0.0759168565197 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045 0.0366838410393 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.015 0.0131127313244 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.205 0.155750635184 132% => OK
Participles: 0.02 0.0379272487307 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41476355408 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.02 0.0210936926555 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.08 0.0948980150116 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1004.0 1161.00487805 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67231638418 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.265536723164 0.337110787985 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.175141242938 0.247514529752 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.124293785311 0.171178102325 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0677966101695 0.112407865282 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41476355408 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553672316384 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 47.861682212 49.3433353143 97% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2857142857 23.0094962315 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6816372261 42.9750493124 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.428571429 135.714022679 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 23.0094962315 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 42.7998385795 47.7609492067 90% => OK
Elegance: 3.16666666667 2.94281807926 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435779258059 0.418131533498 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.199121503906 0.181151798455 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717413638845 0.0850326197045 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.777821886603 0.706616315825 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151289081013 0.157042692854 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267545159231 0.228904883108 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099134031484 0.108899403657 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35156969505 0.367819155151 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.079115427904 0.0812612215331 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340271499478 0.316326947829 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751353548637 0.0921553760075 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9