The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services-to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart featured in task 1, demonstrates the role of agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services in the UK economy in the twentieth century.
First of all, let us take a look at agriculture service contribution, in 1900, it was about 50 percent and with the passage of time, in 1950 increased gradually and reached well over 50 percent and in 1975 slumped to 10 percent. Besides, by 2000 it had dropped to well under 5 percent.
Turning to the data of manufacturing service contribution, in 1900, it was nearly 45 percent and fell slightly to 40 percent in 1950 and reduced to 35 percent in 1975. Also, it should be noted that by 2000 it had dropped to 15 percent.
Moving onto the business and financial service contribution, in 1900, it was just under 5 percent and in 1950, went up moderately to 10 percent and doubled in value in 1975. It is also worth mentioning that by 2000, it had risen to 35 percent.
If we analyze the data, we can see that the contribution of agriculture service reduces in the whole period of time, by taking account of a slight increase in 1950. Nevertheless, the manufacturing service contribution has a downward trend, the business and financial service contribution has an upward trend in the period of time.
To sum up, before 1975, the agriculture service contribution had had the most vital role in contribution to the UK economy and in 1975, the manufacturing service contribution and in 2000, the business and financial service contribution had the most crucial impact.
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