The stipulated bar diagram depicts the information regarding the role of three major sectors in Britain's economy during the twentieth century. The mentioned parameters are agriculture, manufacturing, business and finance.
It has been clear from the data that during the start of the century agriculture sector dominated the UK's economy, accounted for almost half of the total economy (49%). This rising trend continued till the middle of the century and then started to decline and ended up in lowest contributor (2%) to the economy in 2000. Likewise manufacturing sector also showed similar pattern.It's figures were dip in to just 15% from 45%, at the end of the period.
On the contrary, Business and financial sector showed a completely different trend. In 1900, it had only accounted for less than 5% of the economy. But, by 1950's the sector were able to hold more than 10% of the total economy. Just over 25 years of time the proportion were almost doubled to 20%. One important point to be noted that, at the end of the century it had accounted for one third of the total economy.
In conclusion, In the start of the twentieth century traditional sectors like agriculture and manufacturing dominated Great Britain's economy. While, business and financial sector taken over this lead when the economy was moved to modern era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the lowest'.
Suggestion: in the lowest
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, regarding, so, then, third, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06334841629 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72077801993 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561085972851 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8435945031 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192935083298 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758076700235 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684047716579 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13615489118 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757003927492 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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