The graph depicts the quantities of goods transported in the United Kingdom by four distinct modes of transportation between the time period 1974 and 2002. The information has been calibrated in tonnes.
It is quite discernible from the graph that quantity of goods transported by road in 1974 was about 70 million, from where it erratically and gradually rose to reach 95 million roughly.
In regard to water , the amount of goods transported from 1974 to 1974 remained flat at 40 million, where it showed a significant growth, soaring to almost 60 million in 1982 after which it plateued for t...
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Sentence: In regard to water , the amount of goods transported from 1974 to 1974 remained flat at 40 million, where it showed a significant growth, soaring to almost 60 million in 1982 after which it plateued for the next one and a half decade before starting to rise moderately again to reach 65 million in 2002.
Error: plateued Suggestion: plateaued
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