The graph reveals the information about the passengers' activity in Toronto Metro System throughout the weekdays in july 2007. The data has been calibrated in thousands.
At the first glance, it is quite apparent that the number of commuters at 6 A.M, 100,000 , soared tremendously reaching a peak of 400,000 at 8 A.M . Not after much time, it dramatically plunged to approximately 200,000 at 10 A.M. Later on, it rose gradually till 12 P.M to reach about 300,000 where it flattened out till 2.AM.
Going further, it tumbled sharply where it bottomed out to 100,000 at 4 P.M before skyrocketing t...
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- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier is there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 80
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 68
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 45
- NOWADAYS ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS ARE TOO BIG TO BE MANAGED BY INDIVIDUAL PERSONS OR INDIVIDUAL COUNTRY. IN OTHER WORDS, IT IS AN INTERNATIONAL PROBLEM. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? 85
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