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The line graph shows the sales of children’ books, adult’s fictions and educational books between 2002 and2006 in one country.
The line chart compares the amount of sales of different categories of books（children’s book, adults’ fiction, educational book）during the period from 2002 to 2006 in one country.
The sale volume of adults’ fiction ranked first in 2002, which is 45 million dollars. It fell to 37 million dollars in 2003, lost its leading position to children’s book. Although it saw a brief rally, rose slightly to 40 million dollars in 2004, the saleroom still declined to 30 million dollars in 2006. When it comes to children’s book, the sales of which occupied the second place in 2002（34 milli...
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The sale volume of adults’ fiction
The sales of adults’ fiction
Although it saw a brief rally, rose slightly to 40 million dollars in 2004,
Description: what is the subject for 'rose'?
Sentence: The line chart compares the amount of sales of different categories of bookschildren's book, adults' fiction, educational bookduring the period from 2002 to 2006 in one country.
Error: bookduring Suggestion: ?
Sentence: Although it saw a brief rally, rose slightly to 40 million dollars in 2004, the saleroom still declined to 30 million dollars in 2006.
Error: saleroom Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
sentences are not developed smoothly:
'the amount of sales of different categories of books'
Doesn't need to give reasons like:
'the reason cause this phenomenon might be that children’ s education are getting more concern.'
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