Given is the map which portrays two possible locations for construction of a supermarket in a city, namely Garlsdon having population of 65000.
To begin with, the first choice (S1) is situated in the country and it is 12 Km far from Hindon city with a population of 10000. Furthermore, this area (S1) is placed between the railway and main road. Overall, as per given evidence, this place could be accessible mainly for inhabitants of the suburb and Hindon dwellers.
Moving to the second alternative (S2), it is in the middle of town center which does not have any traffic zone. This feasible place is near the railway and also it is about 16 Km from Bransdom with 15000 inhabitants and 25 Km from Gransdon with 29000 dwellers. Moreover, the second choice (S2) is also surrounded by industrial area and housing zone in north and south. Generally, as indicated, the second place (S2) is nearby more crowded areas.
To sum up, with taking all evidence into account, both alternatives have their own merits and demerits.
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