The pie chart illustrates the information about causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today . The table shows how factors affected different regions of the world during the 1990s.
According to the pie chart, It can be clearly seen that, Globaly,65% of land degraded by the animals and land clearance. Constituting 35% and 30% respectively. A further 28% of land degraded by the over-cultivation of crops. Other causes account only 7% collectively.
Turning into rest of description,The table shows the factors affected North America ,Europe and Oceania during 1990s .In North America 5% land degraded, 3.3% land affected due to over-cultivation of crops.In Europe, 23% land degraded and 9.8% an account of deforestation . In Australia and New Zealand , 11.3% land affected by over -grazing and total 13% land degraded. As per as comparison is concerned , 0.2%land affected by trees clearance in North America followed by 1.7% in Oceania whereas over-cultivation of crops did not affect in Oceania.
It is , therefore, cleared that the largest part of land affected by deforestation in Europe whereas over grazing was the major factor in Oceania.
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