The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates of the number of different categories of a coffee, a tea, pastries and sandwiches sold in various times during the week a day. Overall, the coffee is the best sale amongst the weekdays regardless with the time. However, pastries have sold well only in the morning, especially from 7.30 am to 10.30am. In other times, from 10.30am to 2.30pm and 5.30pm to 8.30pm are the popular times with sandwiches.
Firstly, the coffee shop made a significant sale in coffee and pastries from 7.30 am to 10.30 am. The coffee shop has sold 265 cups of coffee and 275 pastries, which is compared to 110 cups of tea and 50 sandwiches sold at the same period of time.
Next, 185 cups of coffee has sold with 200 sandwiches, which were the most outstanding combinations of sales compared to 50 cups of tea and 95 pastries combinations in the period of 10.30 am to 2.30pm during that week.
During 2.30pm to 5.30pm, the similar number of coffee and pastries has sold of 145 and 150 respectively. From 5.30pm to 8.30pm, 200 cups of coffee and 110 sandwiches have sold.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 200 200
No. of Characters: 855 1000
No. of Different Words: 80 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.761 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.275 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
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Sentence Length SD: 7.983 7.5
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