Write a thank you note to your closest friend.
Hi Ann,
I am writing this letter to express my appreciation.
When I was having everything new experiences, you helped me out. I was new to the country (Korea) and new jobs (teaching) and you proposed an opportunity as a teacher, to me.
Even though, I had some difficulties of dealing and controlling the kids because of no previous teaching experiences, you helped me out every time.
You had also worried about my feelings like a family. Especially, the time when you gave me the plaster because I fall down from the stairs, I was very touched. Also when I had a sore throat, you were told me to be careful as you passed me by. At that time, I could feel that you were actually worried about me.
I appreciate everything for what you have done for me.
Now I gathered teaching experience for over a year with your support, I feel that I have to thank you for all your assistance.
Even though I have to leave this place for all the reasons as you have mentioned, I will always remember you and always feel thank you for the greatest experiences gave me.
Best of luck,
- The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010 70
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan 93
- Average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories 70
- Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
- Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of th 70
When I was having everything new experiences, you helped me out.
When I was having everything with new experiences, you helped me out.
flaws:
Number of Paragraphs: 7 4
-------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 198 200
No. of Characters: 840 1000
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.751 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.242 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.535 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.805 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.472 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.848 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.377 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 4