Television sales (millions) 1996-1999
Based on the graphs we can see the fluctuation of television sales during 4 years. The lowest sale of television occurs in 1996. This year the number of sales of 6 millions units television. There is a sharp increase between in 1996-1998, with purchase frequency of television to the number of 11 millions dollar units at 1998. After this, in the middle between that, in 1997 only as many 8 millions; ascend 2 million dollar from 1996. During three years, happened go up the number of television sales consistently. The last year in 1999, it happen decrease of disposal television the rate of 10 millions dollar. It means only fallen away as much 1 millions dollar.
Overall, the graph tells us that occur escalation disposal of television in the last four years, in the first once a year, in 1998 is the highest sales activity of televisions. Although, dramatically go down in the rate of 1 millions of years previously. It is give evidence that our society has purchasing power to sale the television.
This year the number of sales of 6 millions units television.
This year the number of sales is 6 millions units for television.
Sentence: There is a sharp increase between in 1996-1998, with purchase frequency of television to the number of 11 millions dollar units at 1998.
Description: The tag a preposition is not usually followed by in
Suggestion: Refer to between and in
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to millions and dollar units
Sentence: After this, in the middle between that, in 1997 only as many 8 millions; ascend 2 million dollar from 1996.
Description: The fragment ; ascend 2 is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace ascend with verb, past tense
Sentence: During three years, happened go up the number of television sales consistently.
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Suggestion: Refer to happened and go
Sentence: Overall, the graph tells us that occur escalation disposal of television in the last four years, in the first once a year, in 1998 is the highest sales activity of televisions.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to sales and activity
Sentence: It is give evidence that our society has purchasing power to sale the television.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and give
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No. of Words: 174 200
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No. of Different Words: 97 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.632 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.644 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.663 2.4
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 6.365 7.5
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