The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the two maps providing information about the changes of one particular island after the construction of various types of tourist facilities.
According to the first map it is clear that apart from several groups of palm trees and a beach on the left of an island the island was completely empty.
Referring to the second map total changes is observed in the island. First of all, there has been constructed many accommodations in two groups for tourist. One group is surrounding the palm trees on the left side of the island. Additionally, footpaths which lead from the tents to the beach as well as to the vehicle track which were constructed around the reception. On one hand vehicle tracks leads to the restaurant in the north of the island on the other it connects the island with the pier on the shore in the south.
The other group of accommodation were constructed in the middle of an island and two of the palm trees were cut down, instead one palm tree were planted at the east side of the island. Also, boats are in use at the sea in terms of tourists needs.
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footpaths which lead from the tents to the beach as well as to the vehicle track which were constructed around the reception
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
vehicle tracks leads to the restaurant
vehicle tracks lead to the restaurant
The other group of accommodation were constructed
The other groups of accommodations were constructed
instead one palm tree were planted
instead one palm tree was planted
Sentence: Also, boats are in use at the sea in terms of tourists needs.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to tourists and needs
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