You colleague is coming back from a vacation abroad. Write a letter to him/her and say
- Invite him/her to a party and mention the date and venue.
- Write about some good news at the office.
- Explain the reason for the party
Dear James,
How are you? Hope you are doing good and enjoying your vacation .You will be blissful to know that many of our teammates got promoted to a higher role including me; moreover, boss had agreed to promote you in the month of August.
As you are aware, since last six months I have been waiting for this moment. Now, to celebrate this special occasion, I am organizing a small get together next week on the 25th July. The venue would be Bombay dreams that is one of the eminent Indian restaurants in my area. This is the main reason, I am writing to you now, so that you can come along with your family to make this prominent day special.
If you remember, before your leave we have been working on the pilot project for the AIA Insurance Company situated in London, UK. Finally the project is being approved by the company and for the project work we all need to travel to London for 6 months. The good part is that company would give us the extra allowance in UK excluding the salary that we are getting here. In addition, company would arrange a house and a car for all of us.
As I need to go for a meeting now, I will catch you later. Hope to see you soon in the office.Bye for now.
Regards
Michael
- Some people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their brunches offices and factories in order to develop their economies Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead Discuss both views and give your own op 75
- Usually students have to study a range of different subjects Some people believe that learning subjects without being interested in them won t be beneficial Do you agree or disagree with this statement 92
- The local council has decided on constructing a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you live. Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper protesting against this move. Make suggestions as to how people can stop this development. 80
- You cannot go to a company where you got an offer Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much 74
- Most employers do job interviews before offering a position to a person Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives What is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion 64
Hope you are doing good and enjoying your vacation
Hope you are doing well and enjoying your vacation
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 232 200
No. of Characters: 952 1000
No. of Different Words: 140 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.903 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.103 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.113 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.846 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.371 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.338 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.638 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.231 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4