You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter- explain why you have moved- describe the new house- invite your friend to come and visit

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You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
- explain why you have moved
- describe the new house
- invite your friend to come and visit

Dear friend,

I hope this letter reach to you in good health. It's been awhile since we get together or talk at all. I would like to share my great news regarding our recent move. Allow me to give you more details about it.

Since we had my youngest son, we've been hoping to get a place of our own so we wouldn't have to keep looking for a better place and worry about rental increase. Luckily, we found this spacious unit in the East and we immediately grabbed the chance. We now have our own house!

Though the location is quite far from my workplace, the environment is good for the kids. T...

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I hope this letter reach to you in good health
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 225 200
No. of Characters: 916 1000
No. of Different Words: 137 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.071 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.161 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 29 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.062 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.909 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.188 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.172 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4