You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own.
Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- say why are you are interested in this sports club
- ask some questions about the club (e.g. facilities, members, costs)
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my interest in making use of the facilities in your sports club. I am a freshman student at the nearby school and has been very active in gymnastics since my primary years. Let me explain further regarding my request.
It has been no secret that your sports club is well-known for its complete and latest facilities. I even learned that a number of international gymnasts train here as well. Not to mention the short distance of this club from my hometown. I am eager to know how I can get in so I could continue on my gymnastics training.
However, ...
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