You recently sent an application to a certain program in a college and you had no reply to it. Write a letter to the principal about the delay.

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You recently sent an application to a certain program in a college and you had no reply to it. Write a letter to the principal about the delay.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to bring to your notice about no update about the application which I submitted on 15th June 2014 for Journal writing course.

The course details along with the perquisites got published in all English newspapers and last date for receiving the application mentioned as 24th June 2014. I downloaded the form from the given link and completed the application form and posted application form to mentioned address in the advertisement before two weeks of last date. Till date i.e., 03rd July 2014,I did not get an acknowledgement till now.

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