You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
Ask them for help finding accommodation
Tell them where you would like to live
Tell them the type of place you are looking for
Hello Jonny,
How are you? It's been long time since we met last, isn't it? So here is the surprise for you. I have got new job in your city and am likely to move there by end of this month.
My new office is right at the city center and planning to take accommodation in close by area. I will be shifting there with my wife as she is also leaving her current job and will look for another job there only. I need your help to find good apartment near by city center and I think that will help save some time on travelling to and fro between home and office.
We are thinking to have apartment with basic amenities, mainly in kitchen as i am really not interested in buying fridge, cooker etc again there. Our budget is between $ 600 - $ 700 and believe that is good amount for an apartment with 1 bedroom.
Please let me know if you need any further information from me related to same and let us know when you find something for us.
Thanks mate,
Krupesh.
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