You would like to find a new place to live.
Write a letter to the local estate agency. In your letter
- explain why you would like to move
- say what type of house you would like
- ask about the options you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hello, I am Darby Shin who would like to move to a new place. I am writing this letter to ask you to find the new place. There are three people in my family who are my son, wife and me.
My house which I have been living in for the last five years is too old to live anymore, for the roof of my house leaks rain. Additionally, my neighbors make noise every night. I think that they have played a party at that time. I would like to move to a new place to provide a better environment for my family. Therefore, I need a new house, which is clean, not old, a quiet place. In addition, I hope that I will live in the new place having my own garden, and three rooms- one room is for a dressing room, another room is for my son and the other room is for my wife and me.
I know that I ask you too many things. I do not care about the price of the new house. Please find the best house for us. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Faithfully yours,
Darby Shin
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for the roof of my house leaks rain.
because the roof of my house leaks in rain.
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More compound or complex sentences wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 202 200
No. of Characters: 747 1000
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.77 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.698 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.891 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 25 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 14 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 7 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 5 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.437 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.361 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.603 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4