1: The information below gives details about household income and spending
on food and clothes by an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013.
The pie chart and table give information about domestic income and the percentage of spending on food and clothes from an average family in Uk in 2010 and 2013.
Overall,the table witnessed a fall of total income after 3 years and a rise of spending on food and clothes. Over a 3-year period , the need for fruits and vegetables and dairy products had increased while that for clothes and meat and fish dropped.
Looking at the table, The total income fell from 29000 to 25000 dollars and the money spending for food and clothes grew by 1000 dollars.The figure for total income in the year 2010 was slightly 2 times higher than that for expenditures on clothes and food .
Moving to the pie chart. The percentage of clothes decreased from the second highest with 22 percent to the lowest with 12 percent after 3 years.The most significant rise belonged to money spending on fruits and vegetables from 20 to 35 percent.Uk saw an unchanged data for other clothes and food with 18 percent . Whereas the percentage of dairy products grew moderately by 10 percent, that of meat and fish reduced considerably 10 percent.
- The table shows the amount of money given in aid of technology of developing countries by charities in the US, EU and other countries from 2006 to 2010. 67
- The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctorsand other workers in seven countries in 2004. 67
- Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. 73
- Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n food and clothes. Over a 3-year period , the need for fruits and vegetables and...
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...r food and clothes grew by 1000 dollars.The figure for total income in the year 201...
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...hat for expenditures on clothes and food . Moving to the pie chart. The percen...
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...he lowest with 12 percent after 3 years.The most significant rise belonged to money...
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...ts and vegetables from 20 to 35 percent.Uk saw an unchanged data for other clothes...
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...r other clothes and food with 18 percent . Whereas the percentage of dairy product...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77720207254 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55860098174 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6057316656 43.030603864 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22594008038 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114621894263 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157330044415 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187578021559 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173385737116 0.0819641961636 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.