acid rain emissions

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acid rain emissions

The graph gives information about the number of acid rain emissions in millions of tonnes from four batches in the UK between 1990 and 2007.
It is clear from the graph that the transportation and communication have a slight upward trend. Meanwhile, the other subject surveyed tend to decrease their number of acid rain emissions over the time of this search. All of the time, the acid rain emission from the domestic were lowest in comparison with the rest.
In 1991, the figure for Electricity, gas and water supply occupied highest position with about 3.3 tonnes and much more about 1.2 tonnes compared to the acid rain created by transport and communication. From 1991 to 1996, the statistic of domestic and other industries had the same pattern and fluctuated slightly around the range from 0.5 to 0.7 tonnes.
From 1996 onwards, the emission from transport and communication gained the first position with 1.75 tonnes and decreased modestly by 0,5 tonnes in 2001 before keeping the stable level the six next years. Over the same periods, the electricity, Gas and Water supply witnessed a significant decrease to 0.5 tonnes in 2007 and only much more than Domestic about 0.2 tonnes. On the other hand, the figure for transport and communication peaked at a tonnes and fell to 0.75 tonnes in 2007.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93181818182 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60854840733 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6810318143 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.555555556 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261151674921 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136544024858 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152786085049 0.0843802449381 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210394715052 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145455397224 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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