Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to express my interest for the computer course in your college.
My name is smita. I am working as an accountant in xyz company. I came to know about this course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but there is one exception that I do not have elementary certificate of this.
Here, I would like to explain the reason firstly I am an accountant so I do not get time to do elementary course but I know the basics of computers properly even I do most of accounting on computer. Secondly, I feel my presentations are quite simple so to improve my productivity I am interesed in this course. Therefore,I will be able to use advance features of presentations and used it for other purposes.
I just want to request that please consider my application for this course under exception. If you want me to give test of elementary course, then I will be ready to give exam. I also have my presentations and projects to show. Please choose any way whichever is more convenient to you.
Looking for a positive reply.
Yours faithfully
Smita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but ...
^
Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...I am interesed in this course. Therefore,I will be able to use advance features of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60606060606 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90528300161 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0337054865 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1428571429 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196382250185 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600271981215 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457931853611 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107637064548 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060114990843 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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