The chart illustrates percentage changes of prices, in five main cities, from 1989. There are two parts of average prices: between 1990-1995 and between 1996-2002 years.
In details, the first part of chart show that in New York, London and Tokyo prices declined by 5% and more. But after 1995 year they increased prices exept London. For New York and Tokyo prices doubled and increased by 10%. Then it was around 5% instead of -5% compared with the average price in 1989.
Unfortunately, we can see the prices of Tokyo increased by only approximately 2,5% and was -5%.
However, the capital of Spain has stable rise in average house price in all 12 years. In the first part price pose by 2% and in the second part has also a rise by 4% compared with a 1989 year.
In addition prices in Frankfurt climed in both two years, but if we corpure prices between the first and the second parts, we can see that there was a fall by 1%.
The price of houses in London increased wildly. In years between 1990 and 1995 the average prices were less than in 1989 by 7,5% but after 1995 was gradually rise by 18,5% and stabilized at 11% compared with the 1989.
It is noticeable that in all cities were rises in average prices in 12 years. When compared to prices of 1989 and 1990-1995 years, we can see that in three cities had drop in prices and in 1996-2002 cities increased their prices exept Tokyo. London was the city that had the largest variation in house prices among all five cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reased prices exept London. For New York and Tokyo prices doubled and increased b...
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...se by 4% compared with a 1989 year. In addition prices in Frankfurt climed in both two...
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... In addition prices in Frankfurt climed in both two years, but if we corpure pri...
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...89 by 7,5% but after 1995 was gradually rise by 18,5% and stabilized at 11% compared...
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... in house prices among all five cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51111111111 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23693892353 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455555555556 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4696321484 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4087329736 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170152889478 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104159518516 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218206755311 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105553927187 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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