The bar chart compares the percentage of the urban population in five different continents and globally in 1950, 2007, and the projection for the year 2030.
Overall, the percentage of people living in urban areas increased over time, and a great ratio of the world population would live in cities in the future. However, these increment rates are different for each area.
Initially, in 1950, about 29% of the global population lived in urban areas. The majority of these were in American and European continents, while only 15-17% Asian and African lived in cities.
After 57 years, around half of the global population lived in cities. In Europe and America, this ratio went as high as eight out of ten. On the contrary, more than one-third of Africans lived in urban areas this year, while it was slightly over 40% in Asia.
It is projected that six out of ten people around the world will live in urban areas by 2030. This year, more than 80% of Americans would live in the city, while European urban residents share almost the same ratio as the Americans. In Africa and Asia, more than half of the population will start living in urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, third, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77611940299 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3270928228 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512437810945 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8430993247 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361950980447 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139694040615 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815507054303 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211657162478 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588715551055 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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