The table shows the top ten medal winning countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games. The rank was determined by the number of achieved gold medals. Overall, the United States had the highest number of gold medals while Australia had the lowest gold medals.
It can be seen that the United States won the greatest number of medals with 104 in total and they also got the highest number of gold and silver medals. China and Great Britain, ranked second and third, won a total of 88 and 65 medals respectively.
Although Russian athletes won more medals than British athletes and have the highest number of bronze medals, Russia placed after Great Britain with 5 gold medals less, 24 gold medals.
Furthermore, South Korea was in 5th position, with 13 gold medals and 28 total. Germany and France followed South Korea were in 3rd and 4th positions with 44 and 34 total medals respectively.
Similarly, Italy and Hungary both won 8 medals, while Australia was at the bottom of table, winning just 7 gold medals. Although Australia won more medals than France, Italy, and Hungary, they ranked lower because countries were ranked based on the proportion of gold medals they won.
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- The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, second, similarly, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90049751244 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2850936369 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5259909929 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171160305836 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930882647986 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114016446233 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105960003773 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649313623496 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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