The bar chart shows the changes in the proportion of population who live in urban areas in six different regions of the world and in the years 1950,2007 and 2050.
As we can see the bar chart , between 1950 and 2007 the population living in cities in North America had experience the highest percentage and it will be continue in 2050. On the other hand , Africa has the lowest percentage of the population living in urban areas in the years . Although the population increase significantly in Latin America and Caribbean from 1950 to 2007 ,from 42% to 76,in Oceania populatıon had rose slightly , increasing by only 9% .
According to the bar chart , in 1950 , Asian people chose to live in rural areas while european people lived in city . It is surprisingly that in Asia the changes in percentage of populatıon in urban areas will climb the faster than orher countries .
Overall , people began to live in the urban areas over the years .
- the bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 56
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 73
- Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only betterfor their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion 61
- The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62998793022 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9980694477 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360462786962 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184737675905 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928421739255 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238500858417 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633390590112 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.