The line graph shows international tourist arrivals in five countries between 1990 and 2005.
As we can see the line graph , the number of tourists stood at 70 million in 1990 ,which was the highest total . There was a gradual rise to 90 million for a decade , the figure then almost levelled out until the end of the period . Next , beginning at 30 millon in 1990 , Central and Eastern Europe had experinced a significantly increase in the number of international tourist , rocketing to 90 million for a decade . Then , the number of international tourist visiting South-East Asia rose steadily over the whole period by 2005 the total visitors number was still under 50 million . the region with the fewest tourıst arrivals were South america and sub-saharan africa . thenumber of tourist going there was similat between 1990 and 1995 but after there was a greater increase in tourist going on sub-saharan africa than to south america .
Overall ,the total number of tourists rose in five countries . however , sub-saharan africa and south america had experinced a small gap than others .
- the bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. 67
- The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. 61
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 56
- Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only betterfor their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06741573034 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71851415358 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3551316475 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 1.69756097561 1532% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137030394631 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679961397012 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619578842449 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122810389584 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778066633602 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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