The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.
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The column chart illustrates five defferent industries'proportion shre of Brazilan economy from 2009 to 2019 with a forecast for 2029
Overall , there is a decline in the percentage of food processing, manufacturing , tourism and coil , coal and gas ,with the share of munufacturing witnessing the most dramamtic drop . While the figure for the finance seem to have significant rise and highest over the period
In term of finance , in 2009 , this figure counted for more 30 % and then in 2019 this number increased to more 35% and the aforemantioned number will increase anf approximately 425 . in 2009 , the percentage of food processing was 10% but in 2019 this figure rocketed to more 20% .However , in 2029 it will has the same number at 10% .In addition ,the number of munufacturing in 2009 was the highest and reduced to 15% and has the forecaste for 2029 is 5% . Furthermore , in 2009 , the proportion of tourism in Brazil was 25% ,addionally , in2009 and in 2029 it have a same number with more 20% . Finally , oil ,coal and gas , this group in 2009 was 25 % , in 2019 was 30% and 2029 is 25 , respectively .
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