The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations

The chart illustrates the amount of budget spent on each sectors from five different factories A, B, C, D, and E.
Overall, it can be clearly see that organization B invest money more than four remain organizations. In addition, building spent money more than machinery, staff training, and research.
Turning to the chart for the detail, factory B invest the most money in staff training, at about €1.9 billion, while the most amount of budget spent on building is recorded in organization D, and E, at around €1 billion. Besides this, the least amount of money of company B spent on machinery, at €0.9 billion, whereas organization D, and E invest the least money in research.
In terms of other companies, factory A spend the most amount of budget on building, at €1.5 billion, while the most amount of money of organization C invested in machinery, and research, at €1.3 billion. Moreover, company A spend about €1.2 billion on staff training, which lower significantly factory C, at €1.9 billion.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
.... In terms of other companies, factory A spend the most amount of budget on building, ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rch, at €1.3 billion. Moreover, company A spend about €1.2 billion on staff training, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04142011834 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83573360977 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0905302876 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252062330206 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139724201974 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858434946985 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18065330803 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707036636188 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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