The bar chart below shows the number of visitors to four London museums.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
This graph illustrates how many tourists visit four different museums in London in four straight months, starting from June and in December
There are dramatic gaps in numbers among these museums. The British Museum seems to have the highest visiting rate over the months, moreover, most people tends to go to museums in August.
In the beginning, the British Museum achieves approximately 410,000 tourists. The number remains until August, there is a dramatic rise by 300,000 tourists, which means the number climes to more than 700,000. The next two months, this figure declines rapidly and reaches about 450,000 at the end of the year.
In contrast, those three others museums which are History Museum, National Museum and Science Museum, seem to decrease over time. In June, their tourist rates is 400,000 for the History Museum, 210,000 for the National Museum and the last one, 420,000 for the Science Museum. For the National Museum, its number is the most lowest for al 5 months and there's no such a big change recorded. In the last month, December, the three number drop down to 210,000, 180,000 and 300,000 in order.
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- task 1
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'lowest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: lowest
... the National Museum, its number is the most lowest for al 5 months and theres no such a bi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... is the most lowest for al 5 months and theres no such a big change recorded. In the l...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05319148936 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2760488506 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8862611563 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126532696311 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593825882176 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362949588464 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845429942325 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024788047631 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.