The bar chart below shows the passenger kilometres traveled by different means of transport in the UK in 1990 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts information about the travelleddistance of commuters by various transport vehicles in England, measured in billions of kilometers, between 1990 and 2000.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is apparent that the total travelled distance of all means of transport experienced an increase throughout the period of 10 years, regardless of a slight decrease in this number of bikes and bicycles. In addition, bus was the most popular vehicle among the passengers while air transport had the smallest distance travelled by English citizens.
In 1990, it is clear that passengers only commuted about 5 billions of kilometers by air where this figure of bus stood at 40 billions of kilometers. However, the distance travelled by plane attendants doubled in 2000. Simultaneously, the kilometers that bus takers went rose insignificantly, which was similar to those travelled by railways.
Moreover, bicycle travelled distance was approximately 7 billions of kilometers in 1990 and witnessed a small dip 10 years later. Interestingly, this number of motorbikes shared the same trend. Nonetheless, the total kilometers travelled of all vehicles still considerably went up, from 100 to almost 114 billions of kilometers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 billion'.
Suggestion: 5 billion
...ear that passengers only commuted about 5 billions of kilometers by air where this figure of ...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '40 billion'.
Suggestion: 40 billion
...y air where this figure of bus stood at 40 billions of kilometers. However, the distance trave...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '7 billion'.
Suggestion: 7 billion
...le travelled distance was approximately 7 billions of kilometers in 1990 and witnessed a smal...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '114 billion'.
Suggestion: 114 billion
...onsiderably went up, from 100 to almost 114 billions of kilometers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61170212766 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30436474864 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9246345585 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141399388021 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604023187521 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341907721033 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922835093379 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253836459129 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.