The Bar Chart below shows the percentage of Australia men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates proportion of men and women involved in some kind of physical activity in different age groups in Australia in 2010.
Overall, most males were physically active in the youngest age group, while females in 45-54, and patterns of age participation of males and females were in contrast to each other, except in the oldest men and women, 65 and above, where ratio was almost similar.
Highest number of males were active physically from 15 – 24 years, 52.8%. Beyond that there was a dip in the percentage of males until 35-44, 39.5%. The ratio registered a gradual rise with advancement of age: from 45-54, 43.1% , 45.1% in 55-64 age group, and 65 and over, 46.7%.
In contrast, the only 47.7% women were active between 15 and 24 years. The ratio witnessed an increment as the age rose, 48.9% in 25-34, 52.5% in 35-44 and 53.3% in 45-55. After this, participation of females declined to 47.1% in age group 65 and over.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8313253012 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45789236857 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8081709809 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289517256526 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13069028945 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136953909548 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217192162217 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153487631342 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.