A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the information about the percentages of Australian male and female did physical activities frequently in various age groups in the year 2010.
It is evident from the bar chart that women in the age 45 to 54 contributed the most in physical activities. In comparison, male tendency to have active lifestyle was more among the adolescence (15 to 24 years old).
As can be seen, at the youngest age group men showed more interest in regular physical activities( 52.8 percent for men, and 47.7 for women). Yet, the trend become reverse for the next age groups. When it comes to 25 to 34, the figure for male dropped by 10 percent and stood at 42.2 percent while for female the figure slightly rose to 48.9 percent. Although in the next age group the pattern is the same, the difference between male ad female did physical activities is exponential (39.5 and 52.5 respectively). However, in the next age groups, male showed an slight increase in tendency for physical activities and for the last age group (over 65) the figure reached to 46.7 percent. In contrast, women who were more than 45 years old did physical activities as well as those between 35 and 44 except for over 65 years old by about 47.1.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, except for, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65909090909 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53176105697 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540909090909 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2828975773 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37284045918 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160802428006 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11459918327 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262080766991 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797449645031 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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