The bar chart illustrates the number of males and females are doing regular physical activity.area of the rate of physical activity the bills and females are 20 different age groups over all the females and bills to the director of physical activity by freezing significant matches while put the males and females Kiliti please similar between the sexes there what’s up baby with @the age group especially in age from 45 to 54 the females get on a regular basis towards the physical activity which includes frequently with regards to their physical activity means approximately teenage witch is from 15 to 20 412/50 2.8% at the lowest which is around 39.5% in the age groups from 35 to 44 for the woman that tragically was higher in the age of 45 to 54 which is around 53.3% which is far better than when the physical activity for women and men were allowed to see at the age group of 65 at over as there is a slight difference of percentage is it is about 46.7% for males and 47.1% in females.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Odiljon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50828729282 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47332461187 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 181.0 22.4926829268 805% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 816.0 112.824112599 723% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 181.0 22.9334400587 789% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296503835521 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.296503835521 0.103423049105 287% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296503835521 0.15604864568 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 90.3 13.2329268293 682% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -95.32 61.2550243902 -156% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 71.5 10.3012195122 694% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.06 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.06 8.06136585366 187% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.4329268293 525% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 74.4 10.9970731707 677% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 11.0658536585 542% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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