The bar chart illustrates the percentage of six different groups of women and men in Australia who did regular physical exercises in 2010.
Overall, apart from people under 25 years old, females were predominantly active in physical exercises. Furthermore, the balance of men and women over 64 years who did regular physical activities was almost identical, with women marginally ahead.
With regards to men, those ageing from 15 to 24 were the most active in regular physical exercises with a percentage of 52.8%. Followed by them were the groups of 65 and over and 55 to 64, which had a proportion of 46.7 and 45.1% respectively. Two groups had a similar rate nearing 42% (25 to 34 and 45 to 54), while males between 35 to 44 were less active in physical activities with an amount below 40%.
Concerning women, those ranging from 45 to 54 ranked first in regular exercises with a percentage of 53.3%. Two groups showed a proportion around 53% (35 to 44 and 55 to 64) accompanied by two nearing 47% (15 to 24 and over 64). Finally, females under 25 were less frequent in physical exercises, with a participation of 47.7%.
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...portion around 53% 35 to 44 and 55 to 64 accompanied by two nearing 47% 15 to 24 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76530612245 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78515356546 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.9528329424 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.777777778 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378891657088 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165431780625 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163480195822 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281421038964 0.15604864568 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175504327173 0.0819641961636 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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