The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women i different age group who did regular physical acitvity in 2010. It's interesting to the bar chart.
In 15 to 24, Australian men's percentage of doing regular physical activity is 52.8 and women's percentage is 47.7. Compare with men and women, men's percentage is higher than women's percentage. However, bar's changed and interesting. After 25 to 64, men's percentage are increasing. In 25 to 34, men's percentage is 42.2. Besides, in 35 to 44, the percentage more decrease until 39.5.
After over 45 age, a few increase like 43.7, 45.1 and 46.7. However, the percentage couldn't over 50%. Then, women's percentages are increase until 54 age like 52.5, 53.3. Although women's percentages are decrease after 55 age, the percentage are higher than men's percentages.
In conclusion, men did regular physical activity more than women when they were teenager and mid twenties. After mid twenties, however, men's percentage was decreased and women's percentage was increase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... 45.1 and 46.7. However, the percentage couldnt over 50%. Then, womens percentages are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23493975904 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80340631201 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.4179461373 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549978828368 0.215688989381 255% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252688234018 0.103423049105 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.239287101714 0.0843802449381 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.389054844806 0.15604864568 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244634345715 0.0819641961636 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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