The given chart illustrates the percentage of Australian men and women routinely exercising depending on their age in 2010. Generally, there is a fluctuation in the percentage of Australian men, with the steady decrease until the age group of 35-44 and after that the increase until that of 65 and over.
On the other hand, women represented the reverse fluctuation where there are the increasing percentage of regularly exercising women until the age group of 45-54 and it started to decrease until that of 65 and over.
Australian men who were 15 to 24 in 2010 tended to do physical activity on a regular basis more than other age groups, while women in the same group showed the second lowest proportion. What is significant is that men never reached over 50% except the youngest age group and it even declined to just under 40% in the group of 35-44-year-old men, with recording the lowest ratio. However, women took more than 50% from 35 to 64 age groups and no considerable decrease of women's percentage of regular physical workout was found on the chart, with little fluctuation around 50%.
The gap between women and men was the biggest in the 35 to 44 age group, with more than 10% difference. In a contrast to this, around 47% of people who were 65 and over regularly took exercise regardless of their sex in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65946529363 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487068965517 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.2515923244 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407014014209 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198696263752 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861620370083 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25685752573 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842924597948 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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