The bar graph shows the proportion of male and female who did physical activity in 6 age groups in Australia in 2010. It is obvious from the graph that the majority of activities in each age groups was done by women.
The most remarkable feature of the chart is that there was only 1 group, in fact 15 to 24 years old, that the percentage of men was higher than that of women. This percentage was 52.8% which was also the highest percentage in men group in all age groups while men, who aged between 35 and 40, doing physical activity was the lowest at 39.5%. The other age groups of men attended exercise ranging from around 42% to around 47%.
The largest proportion in attending physical activity of women was the aged women between 45 and 54 years at 53.3% and there were 2 groups of women, which had percentage over 50 in doing exercise, including 35 to 44 by 52.5% and 55 to 64 by 53%. The lowest of percentage of women exercise was 47.1% in the aged women over 64 years old and this percent nearly equal to the men percentage (46.7%) in the same age group. The rest women groups did regular physical activity around 48%.
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- the pie charts show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. 67
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? (IELTS Academ 61
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 35 to 44 by 52.5% and 55 to 64 by 53%. The lowest of percentage of women exercise ...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...percentage 46.7% in the same age group. The rest women groups did regular physical ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39047619048 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25929172374 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490476190476 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2472221536 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453626602438 0.215688989381 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233943993713 0.103423049105 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093760989919 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337355522965 0.15604864568 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416686408804 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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