the bar chart below shows the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004/2005
The chart gives information about how many people in several age groups living alone in Great Britain in 2004/2005.
Overall, as can be seen, there were considerable differences in the age groups of 75 and over, 65-74 and 25-44 with 75 and over the biggest one. Moreover, similarities could be seen in 45-64 and 16-25 age groups.
Females aged 75 and over were twice as many as males in this group, females at around 58% and males at 28%. This was true of the age group of 65-74 in which there were nearly twice as many females (approximately 33%) as males (approximately 17%). However, people living alone in the age group of 25-44 were more males, at 16%, than females, at 8%.
16-24 and 45-64 age groups were more equally represented which were male-dominated. In 16-24 age group which was the smallest percentage had 5% of males living alone compared to only 4% of females. Moreover, the number of males aged 45-64 were much more different from that of females in which males outnumbered females (roughly males 16% vs females 8%)
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16-24 and 45-64 age groups were more equally represented which were male-dominated.
16-24 and 45-64 age groups were more equally represented, and were male-dominated.
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