The bar chart compares the six purpose for using Internet among adult people in Great Britain in 2001.
It is clear t that Email was the most popular reason why British adults using Internet over the period shown. Additionally, the rates of banking and commercial (vendor) users were equal among two genders.
During 2001, the percentage of mature men in this country using Internet for checking Email was highest, at almost 100%, while the figure for women was slightly lower, at over 90%. There was nearly 40% of adult males playing games on Internet, compared to around 18% of grown-up females.
In contrast, just over 60% of adult female consumers used Internet for commercial purpose, whereas males ‘s figure stood at about 38%. In addition, the rate of grown-up men using Internet for health care reason was only 17%, while the figure for women was noticeably higher, at around 38%. However, the proportions of two genders were the same when using Internet for banking and commercial(vendor), at 41% and 20% respectively.
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities Do you agree or disagree 73
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 73
- The bar chart below shows the reasons for internet usage among British adults(2001) 89
- Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in To what extent do you agree or disagree 66
- Students today can easily access information online so libraries are no longer necessary Do you agree or disagree 30
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04678362573 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5037982842 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2345090271 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286939544777 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1393357753 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961556368869 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210685469937 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947136577003 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.