The given bar chart gives information about the survey which the personnel division at a prime company conducts. Moreover, this chart is presented in terms of various factors affecting the work performance and two age categories.
Overall, the substantial gap could be observed in the variables of chance for personal development, relaxed working environment, and promotion prospects. Other remained factors see equivalent numbers or nearly commensurate.
Turing to the detail, in terms of the pinnacle, people who age 18-30 believe the most affecting factor is the chance for personal development, standing at 90%. However, work environment is the least affected factor among the whole in terms of 18-30-year-old people. By the same token, the predominant number of age group 45-60 could be seen in the factor “money”, arriving at 70%. In contrast, there is the least statistics in the factor of job security among people who age 45-60, with merely one-fifth.
The most striking point is that the chart witnesses the similar number in the factor “team spirit” and “work environment”, standing at 60% and 30%, respectively. It is worth noting that the yawning gap falls into the variable of relaxed working environment, with 80% in age group 18-30 and roughly 30% in 45-60 aged people.
- Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of nation's history.However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is to maintain old buildings? 56
- Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior.Do you agree or disag 78
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 73
- Public money should be spent on treating illnesses rather than promoting healthy life style. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, in contrast, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44174757282 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13624168021 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577669902913 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4358076085 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291113341453 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117918722719 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568073545692 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172057632823 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815764179954 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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