The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company.The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged from 45-60 , and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The given horizonal chart reveals information about the survey conducted by a personal department regarding 10 factors which affects their work performance within two age groups: 18-30 and 45-60 at a major company. The data is calibrated in percentum.
It can be seen that the workers belongs to the age group of 18-20 and 45-60 both have 60% team spirit. Apart from this, the workers of age group 18-30 have 49% and age group of 45-60 have 50% workers are affected from competent boss. moreover, in age group of 18-30, 40% workers are affect by respect from colleagues and 45% workers age group from 45-60. Furthermore, 50% workers are affect by job satifaction of the age group 18-30 and 49% workers are affect by the same factor of age group 45-60. At the last, 70% workers are affected by the money from age group 18-30 and on the other hand 69% workers from age group 45-60 are affect from the same factor respectively.
On the other side, 90% workers from age group 18-30 are affected by personal development but 50% workers are affect from 45-60 age group from same facotor. Moving further, 80% workers are affected from the relaxed working environment from age group of 18-30 and 30% workers from age group 45-60 are affected from the same factor. moreover, 40% and 20% workers are affected by job security from age groups 18-30 and 45-60. on the other hand, 80% and 50% workers are affected by the promotion prospects from the ages 18-30 and 45-60. At the last, both age groups 18-30 and 45-60 have 30% workers which are affected by work environment respectively.
Overall it is evident that, young workers belongs to the age group from 18-30 are more affected then the age group of 45-60.
- Some companies have uniform for their staff which must be wore all the time. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform ? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff? 73
- Young people in disturbed economies tend to become violent causing destruction to life and property What are the causes impacts and remedies of such problem 67
- Some people think it is good thing for the senior management positiona to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the some company or organisation. To what extent do you agree? 61
- Some people say the self employment is better than working for a company or distrubution while others disagree. Discuss both points of view . what is your opinion? 67
- Some people believe that positive feedback at work is important to perform effectively while others argue that positive feedback is a spoiler and people become more confident and their performance degrades. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
...rkers are affected from competent boss. moreover, in age group of 18-30, 40% workers are...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... in age group of 18-30, 40% workers are affect by respect from colleagues and 45% workers...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...rom 45-60. Furthermore, 50% workers are affect by job satifaction of the age group 18-30 ...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...the age group 18-30 and 49% workers are affect by the same factor of age group 45-60. At ...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...nd 69% workers from age group 45-60 are affect from the same factor respectively. On the...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are affected by personal development but 50% workers are affect from 45-60 age gr...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...rsonal development but 50% workers are affect from 45-60 age group from same facotor. Movi...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...5-60 are affected from the same factor. moreover, 40% and 20% workers are affected by jo...
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Suggestion: On
...curity from age groups 18-30 and 45-60. on the other hand, 80% and 50% workers are...
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Suggestion:
...ectively. Overall it is evident that, young workers belongs to the age group f...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kers belongs to the age group from 18-30 are more affected then the age group of ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...age group from 18-30 are more affected then the age group of 45-60.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75084175084 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31165808633 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.363636363636 0.547539520022 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4868932104 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417793065952 0.215688989381 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252643417928 0.103423049105 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900575915079 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322769148651 0.15604864568 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326684493711 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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