The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company.The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged from 45-60 , and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The given horizonal chart reveals information about the survey conducted by a personal department regarding 10 factors which affects their work performance within two age groups: 18-30 and 45-60 at a major company. The data is calibrated in percentum.
It can be seen that the workers belongs to the age group of 18-20 and 45-60 both have 60% team spirit. Apart from this, the workers of age group 18-30 have 49% and age group of 45-60 have 50% workers are affected from competent boss. moreover, in age group of 18-30, 40% workers are affect by respect from colleagues and 45% workers age group from 45-60. Furthermore, 50% workers are affect by job satifaction of the age group 18-30 and 49% workers are affect by the same factor of age group 45-60. At the last, 70% workers are affected by the money from age group 18-30 and on the other hand 69% workers from age group 45-60 are affect from the same factor respectively.
On the other side, 90% workers from age group 18-30 are affected by personal development but 50% workers are affect from 45-60 age group from same facotor. Moving further, 80% workers are affected from the relaxed working environment from age group of 18-30 and 30% workers from age group 45-60 are affected from the same factor. moreover, 40% and 20% workers are affected by job security from age groups 18-30 and 45-60. on the other hand, 80% and 50% workers are affected by the promotion prospects from the ages 18-30 and 45-60. At the last, both age groups 18-30 and 45-60 have 30% workers which are affected by work environment respectively.
Overall it is evident that, young workers belongs to the age group from 18-30 are more affected then the age group of 45-60.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
...rkers are affected from competent boss. moreover, in age group of 18-30, 40% workers are...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... in age group of 18-30, 40% workers are affect by respect from colleagues and 45% workers...
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Suggestion: effect
...rom 45-60. Furthermore, 50% workers are affect by job satifaction of the age group 18-30 ...
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Suggestion: effect
...the age group 18-30 and 49% workers are affect by the same factor of age group 45-60. At ...
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Suggestion: effect
...nd 69% workers from age group 45-60 are affect from the same factor respectively. On the...
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Suggestion:
...are affected by personal development but 50% workers are affect from 45-60 age gr...
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Suggestion: effect
...rsonal development but 50% workers are affect from 45-60 age group from same facotor. Movi...
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...5-60 are affected from the same factor. moreover, 40% and 20% workers are affected by jo...
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...curity from age groups 18-30 and 45-60. on the other hand, 80% and 50% workers are...
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...ectively. Overall it is evident that, young workers belongs to the age group f...
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...kers belongs to the age group from 18-30 are more affected then the age group of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...age group from 18-30 are more affected then the age group of 45-60.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75084175084 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31165808633 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.363636363636 0.547539520022 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4868932104 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417793065952 0.215688989381 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252643417928 0.103423049105 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900575915079 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322769148651 0.15604864568 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326684493711 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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