People living in 21st century are enjoying better quality of the life compared to people who lived in the previous era. Do you agree or disagree?
With the rise in the modernisation. A man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungle to take the first step on the moon. Neverthless, there are some issues, which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that whether the standard of living have been increased with the rise in modernisation? I completely agree with the statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To the begin, it is evedent that the quality of the life had been changed in the present era as compare to the previous era. firstly, we can see that the major change in the present era is the Eduacation system. In past the education system was not good. There were no proper facility for the childerns but now the system have been changed. All childrens of the lower class, middle class and the high class were treated equally in the scools. Teachers gives proper knowledge about the all subjects to the childrens. For examples, smart classes were introduced in the schools in which childrens can grasp the things more easily with the help of audio and visual effects. furthermore, it can polished the intellectual skills of the childrens. In addition, a survey is conducted by the teachers of the differents schools in which they said that, students intellectual skills and adaptive skills were increases with the help of smart class as compare to the regular class.
Secondly, the another change in the life of people from previous era to present era is the change in the communication system. Afterwards, in the previous era, people do not have mobile phones to communicate with each other. They have to go miles away to communicate with their friend and relatives but in the modern world, peole cannot survive without mobile phones. For example, in present era everyone have their own mobile phones through which we can communicate very easily with our friend and relatives. More significantly, We can talk with the person sitting miles away from us. It can changed the whole life of the person. Moreover, we can do video calls to the person sitting in the forign country. At last, we can always stay connected with our friend and relatives.
As we can seen that, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, I tend to believe that standard of the living have been changed with the rise in the modernisation. Apart from that, without mobile and internet we can survive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...h the help of audio and visual effects. furthermore, it can polished the intellectual skill...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'polish'
Suggestion: polish
...and visual effects. furthermore, it can polished the intellectual skills of the children...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...rson sitting miles away from us. It can changed the whole life of the person. Moreover,...
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Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
... our friend and relatives. As we can seen that, there are number of answers to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63356666071 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475294117647 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6394250198 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7692307692 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3461538462 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128287249039 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375480151406 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620350330014 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691167210328 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270892964697 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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