The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The provided bar chart illustrates the total percentage spent on food, housing, transportation, health care and clothing of five major countries namely the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in 2009.

It is evident from the chart that housing ranked the highest proportion spent by Japan, the United States, the United kingdom except for Canada while health and clothing were the lowest expenditure component in all countries.

We can see that the United States spent mostly on Housing, which is 26% of the total expenditure in 2009. The united kingdom and Japan with 24% and 22%, respectively. Canada had the lowest housing share of 21%.

By contrast, Canada had the largest transportation share of all four countries at 20%. The united states and the united kingdom had the next-highest transportation on shares, 17% and 15%, respectively. Japan had the lowest at 10%.

However, in Japan, consumers spent 23 % of their total expenditures on food in 2009. The united kingdom had the second-highest share at 20%. Canada with 15% and the United States with 14% had the lowest food expenditure shares among the countries studied.

Overall, the data indicates that housing and health care shares of the total expenditures were higher in the united states than in Canada, The United kingdom, and Japan in 2009, whereas Americans had the lowest clothing share. Cnada had the highest clothing and transportaion shares, and Japan had the highest food share, among the countries compared

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, whereas, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2479338843 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73369377911 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417355371901 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.7230157015 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313292309121 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136704789943 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775831901173 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209723267335 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543389384113 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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