The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent by the Citizens of UK, Canada, Japan and United states in five categories (Food, housing, Transportation, clothing) in the year 2009.
In a general overview, people from the surveyed countries spent the most in housing whereas the least in health care and clothing.
With regards to house expenses, the people of Unites States have the highest expense with approximately 27%. Closely followed by United Kingdom around 24%, Japan and Canada spent the least in this category, 22% and 20% respectively. Food occupies the second place, Japan leading this kind with 23%, United Kingdom with 20% and Canada and United States allocating almost the same amount with 155 an% 14 % respectively.
The given countries has spent fairly on transportation, Canadian citizens contributed the most with figure 20%, Whereas Japan spent only half this amount. Health care and clothing was the least preferred category of people to spent their money, figures mostly not exceeding 5% in all countries
- The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia Europe and the rest of the world 84
- The table and chart show the time spent at leisure and household activities in 2008 67
- The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States Canada the United Kingdom and Japan in the year 2009 78
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your opinion 73
- Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible What do you think are the advantages of attendi 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29090909091 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66074865288 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1751687376 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25194424379 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128216202028 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126001209665 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160978878704 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156248296262 0.0819641961636 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.