The bar chart depicts the top ten most important countries that generate and consume electricity in the year of 2014.
A close look at this figure reveals that China and the United States were the most prominent nations in generating electricity power around 5,398 and 4,009 billion kWh respectively. In addition, in both countries, electricity production was a little higher than consuming, but in China, these items bore a similarity to each other just 76 billion kWh difference between production and consumption.
Turning to the other countries, there were slight dissimilarities among them, and they experienced a moderate increase from Korea to Russia from 485,1 to 1,057 in generating electrical power, and also, turning to production, they consumed from 449,1 to 1,057 billion kWh. Furthermore, among these eight countries, Germany demonstrated a different number in producing and consumption, and the number of production was a bit lower than the consumption of electricity.
All in all, it can be seen that China and the United States showed considerable and high producing and using up of the electricity in comparison with the others, and also, the remaining countries had a little diversity in generating and consumption of the amount of the electrical power.
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars? 78
- Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37810945274 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07422432117 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.351581473 43.030603864 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.2 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.2 22.9334400587 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150463481349 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098096422807 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074255943204 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114042712942 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757436780119 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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